authors craft
the authors craft in my book is very good if you have ever read Gary Paulson it is very good this is a line from the hatchet one of his books it puts a great picture in your mind. I like to when the book has a lot of detail and little words. Like in my book when terry is shifting his car they give such great detail it puts a good picture in your mind or when Waylon hit the guy and he started to bleed. Or when Wayne said that you drive like steely moss. when terry was drifting around the corners when they were on the way to wayne’s but the best part was when wayne put in the turbo charger for terry. some of the lame parts was when they were playing poker in the log cabin it was amost like gary had kinda got a littel lazy.
this was a very good book for athours craft